The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement making process and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purpse.
The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement making process and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purpose.
The process of cement production starts with limestone and clay which they have to pass throughout the crusher and become powder.However, the powder should pass through the mixer and reach the rotating heater also at the same time will be passing throughout big heat and followed by the last step before to be packed is that powder ought to passed through the grinder and then is becoming cement and after all these steps it is going to be packed.
The concrete production starts with 15% cement and 10% water afterwards sand 25% with small stones 50% and all these products should be mixed into concrete mixer and it is ready to be used for building and etc.
Overall, the steps of making cement are more complicated and must advanced machinery while concrete production requires mixing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, then, while, after all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 789.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93125 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38103673586 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58125 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 22.4926829268 178% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 127.305734356 43.030603864 296% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 197.25 112.824112599 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.0 22.9334400587 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 5.23603664747 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388897717349 0.215688989381 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.32099483098 0.103423049105 310% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.342508357319 0.0843802449381 406% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.32099483098 0.15604864568 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.342508357319 0.0819641961636 418% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.8 13.2329268293 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.8 61.2550243902 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 10.3012195122 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 11.4329268293 227% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.9970731707 164% => OK
text_standard: 26.0 11.0658536585 235% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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