The figure gives information about smoking habits of the UK population by age.

Essay topics:

The figure gives information about smoking habits of the UK population by age.

In one hand we have who never smoke and ex-smokers. Majority of population who never smoked in UK are between the age 16-24 by 61%. However, by the ages, these who have never smoked it is going to decrease their percentage between the years: 45-54, 55-64, 65-74 by 55% to 45%.The ex-smokers between the age 16-24 are 70% but between the ages 25-34, 35-44, 45-54, will be around by 60% to 70%.However when they reach ages between 55-64 and 65-74 are increasing and reaching around by 77% to 85.

On the other hand we have Light smoker and heavy smoker. Light smoker have the biggest percentage between the ages 16-24 and 65-74 by 98% but between the ages 25-64 the percentages are around 88% to 92%. As regard to figures for heavy smokers, middle-aged citizens have the higher proportion of heavy smokers than any other groups. 45-54 age group has the highest percentage of heavy tobacco consumers, at around 15%, followed by 12% of people aged between 35 and 44.

Overall, It is clear that the majority of England citizens are non-smokers. Additionally, people tend to quit smoking as they get older.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ears: 45-54, 55-64, 65-74 by 55% to 45%.The ex-smokers between the age 16-24 are 70...
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...ex-smokers between the age 16-24 are 70% but between the ages 25-34, 35-44, 45-54...
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...44, 45-54, will be around by 60% to 70%.However when they reach ages between 55-64 and ...
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...44, 45-54, will be around by 60% to 70%.However when they reach ages between 55-64 and ...
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... 12% of people aged between 35 and 44. Overall, It is clear that the majority o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77604166667 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43281578935 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557291666667 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 91.6900306925 43.030603864 213% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 101.888888889 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 5.23603664747 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154171966659 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760966096496 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698391880815 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951117782605 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392106543171 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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