The diagrams show the stages and equipment used in the process of cement making and how cement is used to produce the concrete for building purposes.
The given diagrammatic representations revel the information about the production of cement by distinct steps as well as use of equipments, and conversion of cement into concrete for its different building purposes. It is clear and coherent representation.
It is crystal clear that, cement is produced from clay and limestone by using four different equipments: Crushers, Mixers, Rotating Heater and Grinder, whereas concrete is being prepared from four materials: cement, water, sand and gravel in a fixed proportions.
At the first glance, the initial step involves in cement production, which is crushing of both limestone and clay by the use of crusher; the crushed product has been passed through mixer . The resulting mixture from mixer is passed through pipe into rotating heater. After that, rotating heater rotate the mixture along with the supply of heat, and blend is being dropped on the grinder. The end product of grinder is known as cement. Finally, the cement is packed into bags and ready for sale.
However, concrete has been produced from cement by the use four materials: water, cement, sand and gravel. The materials are being taken in proportions of 10%, 15%, 25% and 50% respectively, and concrete mixer is being filled with materials in fixed proportions. Concrete mixture rotates in clockwise direction and concrete is obtained as the final product.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 251, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'proportion'?
Suggestion: proportion
...ment, water, sand and gravel in a fixed proportions. At the first glance, the initial st...
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Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ed product has been passed through mixer . The resulting mixture from mixer is pas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, well, whereas, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1165.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3196347032 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78977990186 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534246575342 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 69.5411169176 43.030603864 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.909090909 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9090909091 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 5.23603664747 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287619106402 0.215688989381 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113987911092 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107631012645 0.0843802449381 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201353534911 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565625881881 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 40.7170731707 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.