One of the most conspicuous trend in today's world is that our environment in which we are living is in danger due to various problems. There are number of problems that can be attributed to this problem. In my opinion this problem can be remedied provide effective measures are taken.
There are myriad of reasons that are accountable for the making the environment in danger. The most preponderant one is that emissions of carbon dioxide from vehicles, industries and many more which entraps the green houses gases that results in to increase in the earth's temperature, increase in sea water level. Apart from this, because of Global warming every country is facing typhoon like tsunami, Fani and many more. Needless to say, all these demerits have far reaching impacts on ecosystem and livigbeing.
Steps to deal with this problem are many, most effective ones are not remote or complicated but accessible and practicable.The primary one lies in stem from the fact that Government should create awareness among the people regarding consequences of this soaring issues and impose the rules and regulation on industries which are producing this harmful gases. Besides that, Private industries should follow all the norms of the government in order to protect our environment.Last but not least, ithe most important role is played by an individual to protect his environment and he should give best possibles input to resolve this issue.
All the arguments outlined above, ne can conclude that whn all the convergent efforts from all the sectors ensure we can expect to see considerable progress in overcoming this soaring concern.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, regarding, so, apart from, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 5.60731707317 428% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 965.302439024 142% => OK
No of words: 265.0 196.424390244 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16603773585 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77492202399 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 106.607317073 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611320754717 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 283.868780488 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.0754532624 43.030603864 216% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 136.9 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122025202448 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557944481679 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765939579468 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0746761379265 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664369528879 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.06136585366 122% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 40.7170731707 204% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.