Favourite school subject for boys in school

This pie-chart provides information on how popular different subjects are among boys in school.

Overall, the chart has divided to eight different areas, seven of them represeting most popular subjects and one for the rest. Physical education and sience are accounted for more than half of the graph.

Looking at details, with 30% popularity, physical education is the most popular subject followed by sience at 25%. Mathematics is the third despite its share of 18%. Then comes technology, English and geography at ten, eight and fiver percent respectively. The rest (4%) is splited between history and all other subjects.

In short, a little less than a third of students prefer physical education and a quarter prefer sience. Mathematics, technology and English, in turn, are prefered the most after those making another quarter of the share combined.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, then, third, in short

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 726.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 136.0 196.424390244 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33823529412 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.41495297035 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69189961355 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669117647059 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.1710199816 43.030603864 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.6666666667 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1111111111 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 5.23603664747 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151829991124 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543510363514 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086483737749 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106027511396 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108586582652 0.0819641961636 132% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.1 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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