The table above provides information on how many vehicles have traveled through three different lanes on average over a nine-year period, from 1993 to 2002.
Overall, the number of travels through all the lines has increased over the period in question. Another interesting point is that Harper Lane has lost considerable popularity after 1998.
Looking at details, Harper Lane starting at 82 vehicles in 1993, experienced a drastic rose to 915 vehicles until 1998, which was his peak. Afterwards, the number of vehicles passed through Harper Lane plunged to just above 200 vehicles and continued to drop until 2000. As for the Great York Way, it started as the busiest road in 1993 with 600 vehicles passing on average. The number of vehicles using Great York Way increased sharply in 1999 after a 6-year of marginal fluctuations and leveled off at around 900 for the rest of the aforesaid period. Long Lane being the most popular road in 2002, started at only 400 vehicles in 1993. The number of passing vehicles then rose to 800 in 1996, at which point it experienced a down fall to 637 in 1997. It then recovered to 1000 vehicles in 1999 and gradually rose to 1400 in the next 4 years.
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. 78
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. 73
- In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. 61
- Being a celebrity - such as famous film star or sports personality - brings problems as well as benefits.Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems? 61
- the table below compares the average number of vehicles using 3 roads. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, then, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82608695652 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48075982154 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584541062802 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0059994001 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203848047674 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814999825247 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437437196403 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109964116357 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350860320024 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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