Celebrities live a different lifestyle from many people, a lifestyle with many benefits and drawbacks. This essay believes that the drawbacks of being a celebrity outweigh its advantages. It discusses the main pros, after considering the cons and comes to a reasoned conclusion.
For most people, financial gain is the most principle advantage in being famous. The majority of celebrities get paid huge amounts of money, even multiple times what skilled professionals like doctors and engineers gain. Being well-paid, celebrities are able to afford luxury cars, expensive houses and therefore live an easier life.
However, fame comes at a price of privacy issues for most of the celebrities. They are unable to enjoy day-to-day activities like normal people do. For example, they cannot dine in a normal restaurant because the crowd pays too much attention to them that they will get disturbed. Severance of these issues can be easily found in many of their interviews, or even in their songs, take 'a piece of me' by Britney Spears for example. This gets more serious when it comes to their safety. They should avoid many public places because simply there are not enough security measures to ensure their safety. These privacy and security issues, gotten worse by the advancement of technologies such as camera-enabled-cellphones, blogs, and social media, do not seem to go away soon.
In conclusion, despite the luxury lifestyle that celebrities living, being constantly watched and in fear for your life from lunatics does not seem to be very appealing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: IN_PRINCIPAL[3]
Message: Did you mean 'principal' (=main)?
Suggestion: principal
...most people, financial gain is the most principle advantage in being famous. The majority...
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Line 5, column 600, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this privacy' or 'These privacies'?
Suggestion: This privacy; These privacies
...curity measures to ensure their safety. These privacy and security issues, gotten worse by th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2390438247 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98523639319 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641434262948 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9066249359 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9285714286 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171699098223 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552421289436 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481858167483 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111056716841 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334089617772 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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