The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. the second chart shows the greenhouse gas emission which results from this energy use
The pie charts illustrate the information about the percentage of energy consumption and gas emission in Australian house in six different factors (water heating, refrigeration, lighting, cooling, heating and other appliances). Overall, The major proportion of using power in Australia was water heating which was the greatest gas-emitting occasion.
According to the first pie chart, The power has been mostly spent on heating which was approximately one-fifth of total usage. Secondly, Boiling water was covered 30% for energy usage among the total consumption of power. Other appliance and refrigeration were demonstrated 15% and 7% respectively while the least expenditure of power was used for cooling, It was 2%. Indeed, the quantity of power usage for lighting had been twice of quantity in cooling.
Furthermore, The gas emission was not entirely equal to the power consumption chart. Gas outting after boiling water was exceeded other five types so There was the lowest release in through cooling.
To sum up, Those two pie charts have many varieties of energy usage and gas emission.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, while, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42105263158 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87537383655 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590643274854 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1926797232 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 5.23603664747 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174142021138 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840300613552 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533212108301 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124521011913 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403245836501 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.