The following maps show some of the changes that have taken place in Dubai in recent decades
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons while relevant
These two maps compare Dubai in recent times and in the
past.
Looking specifically at the maps, it is apparent that there has
been a significant development in this famous and prosperous city.
One thing that is still unchanged until now is the city tower roundabout. However, a few trees have been planted around the edge of this
tower. And all the trees and plants along the street have been uprooted.
In the past, most of the spacious land were unused for any purpose. The
tall buildings are very limited and are nearly surrounded by deserts. However, present-day Dubai has
changed so much from its older days. In the second map, we can see that the main road has been expanded into a larger and more modern one. This facilitates the increasing traffic volume through the city and also shortens the time when traveling to another city. A myriad of skyscrapers has been constructed like international companies, hospitals,
modernized schools, and cutting-edge technological entrepreneurs.
Overall, in the contemporary days, Dubai is considered as the most luxurious city and a worth-living
a place for everyone to experience.
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| 2021-12-19 | IELTS learner from VIETNAM | 78 | view |
| 2021-06-13 | Chu Thị Hải | 90 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, second, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 963.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17741935484 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91487606698 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672043010753 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7529526186 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.25 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 3.83414634146 287% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0970598054715 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034059483833 0.103423049105 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410042866565 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0358128870127 0.15604864568 23% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407562128241 0.0819641961636 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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