The given chart below shows the participation of Australian chilly in sports outside school hour in 2014.
The given vertical chart revels the information about the 5 sports had been played by Australian children outside school during the year 2014. Sports were being played by both male and female. The given data is calibrated in per centimetres.
It can be seen that, in swimming, girls had slightly more participation in comparison to boys by 3%. Apart from all this, 20% of boys and 4% of girls played football during the year 2014. Moreover, number of boys had took part in Netball, Basketball and No sports were 2%, 8% and 4% respectively.
Moving further, peak number of girls participated in Netball in comparison to other to other 4 sports: Swimming, football, Basketball and No Sports. Which were 18%. In addition to this, Basketball was being played by 8% boys and 7% of girls. On the other hand, 5% of girls and 4% of boys participated in no sports.
Overall, it is evident that maximum number of boys had participated in football, whereas maximum number of girls participated in Netball.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
...year 2014. Moreover, number of boys had took part in Netball, Basketball and No spor...
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Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'to other'.
Suggestion: to other
...s participated in Netball in comparison to other to other 4 sports: Swimming, football, Basketbal...
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Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ng, football, Basketball and No Sports. Which were 18%. In addition to this, Basketba...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, whereas, apart from, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87134502924 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7964469584 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520467836257 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7872934354 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7272727273 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5454545455 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 5.23603664747 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177636311145 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684404308791 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856430127831 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118166038103 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100841759462 0.0819641961636 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.