The given chart demonstrates how an essay in a formal academic module is written. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The given chart depicts the process through which a formal academic essay is typically written. Overall, it takes six stages for the final draft to be produced.
In the first private tutorial, the tutor shall introduce the topic, relevant tasks, as well as agree with the students on possible references, in the forms of books or articles. Next, the research stage is followed, demanding tons of reading and note-taking. Field work might also be expected, in which students may hold interviews or ask around with surveys and questionnaires, to collect necessary information. Once all are gathered, students shall plan their outlines carefully before crafting their first draft, which should be written formally and proofread for style errors.
This draft shall be brought to discussion in the second private tutorial, sometimes referred to as study group discussion, in which problems of the draft are identified and suggestions are raised. The students then rewrite the first draft into a second draft, taking what has been discussed into consideration. The finished second draft, along with the next session’s revision and final touches, such as the bibliography and title page, makes for the final draft. Once it is completed, it is of utmost importance to have the final draft submitted by the agreed deadline.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2022-09-13 | xxlusubuxx | 78 | view |
- As major cities in the world are growing today so do their problems What are the problems for young people living in the cities as the result of continued growth What are the solutions to these problems 84
- Some people think that sense of competition should be encouraged in children However others consider cooperation more important to make them good adults Discuss both these views and give your opinion 67
- Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside Other believe that there are health benefits to living in cities Discuss both views and give your own opinion 89
- In the future all cars buses trucks will be driverless The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicle outweigh the disadvantages 78
- In some countries more and more adults are living with their parents after graduating from college University or even after finding a job Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, second, so, then, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1111.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29047619048 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74173670899 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62380952381 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4057779082 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.1 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0708516149625 0.215688989381 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0359065026445 0.103423049105 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762161531362 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0756432953629 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734504884192 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.