The given line chart illustrates the number of people changed between birth and death in Scotland over period 80 years between 1940 and 2020
The line graph represents the proportion of birth, population and death trends in Scotland from 1940 to 2010 and the prediction for until 2020. Overall, all the rates in Scotland plummeted and the population growth rate stopped since 2005, whereas the death rate remained unchanged for more than 50 years. It is notable that, all these trends are expected to continue until 2020.
There was a dramatic plunge in the proportion of birth rates in Scotland from 2.5% to 1.0% between 1940 and 2000, followed by death rates which decreased from 1940 (of 1.5%) until 1960 (of 0.5) and after that this was flat (0.5%) until 2000. In contrast, the population growth rate increased from 1.0% in 1940 to 1.5% in 1950, before it started to decline to reach at close to 0% in 2000 and there were no records for population growth rates in Scotland.
After 2000, when growth rate is excluded, Scotland shows a similar pattern but with a slower declining rate from around the end of 2020. Birth rates are expected to be below 1.0% whereas the death rates are expected to increase to reach at 1.0% by 2020.
- A society develops the technology in communicating devices rapidly such as smart phones, tablets and other communicating devices. Some people claims that the disadvantages of such device outweigh the advantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy. 61
- In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food To what extent do you agree or disagree with 92
- The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy. 61
- Many people choose to live alone. What do you think the advantages of living alone are and do they outweigh the disadvantages? 73
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'whereas', 'in contrast']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.244239631336 0.268076937826 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.133640552995 0.116061578633 115% => OK
Adjectives: 0.036866359447 0.0759168565197 49% => Some adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.00460829493088 0.0366838410393 13% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.00921658986175 0.0131127313244 70% => OK
Prepositions: 0.188940092166 0.155750635184 121% => OK
Participles: 0.0322580645161 0.0379272487307 85% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.2755529605 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0460829493088 0.0210936926555 218% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0783410138249 0.0948980150116 83% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00921658986175 0.00967000014798 95% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1089.0 1161.00487805 94% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.9 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.671875 5.90752243213 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73763899035 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.265625 0.337110787985 79% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.203125 0.247514529752 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.151041666667 0.171178102325 88% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0833333333333 0.112407865282 74% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2755529605 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505208333333 0.546246751206 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 43.0584073506 49.3433353143 87% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 8.93414634146 78% => OK
Sentence length: 27.4285714286 23.0094962315 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9969987112 42.9750493124 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.571428571 135.714022679 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4285714286 23.0094962315 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.428571428571 0.689975730869 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 47.7410714286 47.7609492067 100% => OK
Elegance: 3.15625 2.94281807926 107% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343059035061 0.418131533498 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.153698587418 0.181151798455 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.103559576933 0.0850326197045 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.656393362594 0.706616315825 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.147027872201 0.157042692854 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187438267416 0.228904883108 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124972228407 0.108899403657 115% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.36146426398 0.367819155151 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0720703383986 0.0812612215331 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25413287064 0.316326947829 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.091458068686 0.0921553760075 99% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70731707317 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.14146341463 350% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.08536585366 24% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 0.956097560976 418% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.02926829268 33% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.