The given table illustates data about the level of satisfaction of a urban sport club that is evaluated in three criterias : range of activities, club facilities and opening hours.
The given table illustates data about the level of satisfaction of a urban sport club that is evaluated in three criterias : range of activities, club facilities and opening hours. Overall, majority of boy and girl members say that they feel very satisfied in above issues. the proportion of very satisfied of female members is overwhelming in club facilities and opening hours compare to male one.
As is observed from graph that regarding range of activities, over a half of boy members says that they gain high satisfaction compare to only 35% of girl members. Meanwhile, only 5% of male members shows their opinion that they are not satisfied of range of activities, this figure for girl makes up approximately a third. In terms of club facilities, there are significant percentages in high safisfaction of this criteria, at nearly 65% for each. 27% of male members says that they feel satisfied and only 10% is not satisfied while the percentage of not satisfied of female accounts for 14%. It is noticeable that female members who show very satisfied is 72% and only 3% is not favorable. By contrast, 37% of female members is not satisfied of opening hours while the figure for very satisfied occupies 44% in total.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an
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Suggestion: The
...ey feel very satisfied in above issues. the proportion of very satisfied of female ...
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Suggestion:
...and opening hours compare to male one. As is observed from graph that regarding...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ant percentages in high safisfaction of this criteria, at nearly 65% for each. 27% o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91304347826 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8006654363 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497584541063 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 321.3 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.0119022322 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280410924803 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155445941845 0.103423049105 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.302179580036 0.0843802449381 358% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.330460841822 0.15604864568 212% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.253387574141 0.0819641961636 309% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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