The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101.
The line chart illustrates the transformations of the birth and death rates in New Zealand throughout the period from 1901 to 2101.
As can be seen from the chart, both the trend of birth and death rates was upward whilst the rate of birth experienced several noticeable changes from 1901 to 2021.
In particular, there was a rapid increase in the birth rate from 20 to almost 30 thousand people who were borned in the first 40 years, albeit with a remarkable dip in 1921. Meanwhile, the figure for the other went up marginally from 10 to around 12 thousand deaths, with a sustainable decline in 1921. After that, the rate of birth reached the highest point, at almost 70 thousand people before witnessing several erections and drops until 2021. As regards the other, although the rate recorded a number of fluctuations, it still grew marginally to around 35 thousand people in 2021. In this year, the birth rate stayed at over 50 thousand people, ranking first.
Moreover, the rate of birth is anticipated to fall negligibly to over 40 thousand people in 2101. As regards the death rate, it is predicted to upsurge to 60 thousand people from 2021 to 2041 and hovor around 59 thousand people until the end of the survey.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 113, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lmost 30 thousand people who were borned in the first 40 years, albeit with a rem...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, moreover, still, while, as regards, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1018.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75700934579 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56107167607 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532710280374 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2768817067 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.111111111 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7777777778 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217639820306 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111268977365 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0995198511132 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188533056063 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0989808017931 0.0819641961636 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.