The graph below shors the demand for eleciricity in England during суpical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how eleciriciy is иsed in an aтerage English home. Summmarise the information by selecting and reporting the main fearure, аnd make comparisons where relevant.
The graphs illustrates daily demand of electricity and using an average home in England.
Overall, in winter the number of using of electricity is highest than in summer. Based on second chart, the half of chart, using of electricity is heating system.
First of all, in summer the units of electricity starts from above 15000 units and in winter from 33000 units of electricity. In first 3 hours the units are increased to 40000 in winter, while in summer rate is slowly decrease. After 6 hours in both rates the units of electricity is falling. To 12 o'clock in summer use of electricity grew to 20000 units and doubled in winter. From 12 am to 18 pm units are stable , while in summer rate is fluctuated. In last 6 hours using in winter is sharply rose high more than 40000 and in summer units of electricity increased too.
In pie chart , more than half per cent spending on heating rooms and water .In second place a little less than 18 per cent spends on ovens , kettles and washing washing machines . 15 percent used for lighting , tv , radio and for all electric tools
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...last 6 hours using in winter is sharply rose high more than 40000 and in summer unit...
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...le less than 18 per cent spends on ovens , kettles and washing washing machines . ...
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...ines . 15 percent used for lighting , tv , radio and for all electric tools
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61979166667 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47431969092 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526041666667 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.932780639 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6363636364 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116032753315 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569948514692 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412236676573 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932689151333 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470126406367 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.