The characteristics of large and small families.What are advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

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The characteristics of large and small families.

What are advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

There is an increasing trend around the world to have a neuclear family rather than a big family. There are pros and cons of having a small family rather than a large family.

On the one hand, nowadays small families are rising significantly while there is dramatic decrease in large families. There are several advantages of having a neuclear family. Firstly, people would spend a small amount of money in a small family while in a big family they are spending a lot of money. Secondly, parents in a small family will have enough time to set with thier children, teach them and care of them rather than a large family. Finally, people in a neuclear family could have time to travel and that would not cost them much money but in a big family it is difficult to go abroad and also that cost a lot of money.

On the other hand, there are many disadvantages of having a neuclear family. The main drowback is that people in a small family will not have many siblings and also they may become introverts while in a big family they could have many relatives such as neice, niphew and cousin and that would improve their personality. Moreover, having many relatives such as brothers, sisters and uncles will improve your knowledge and would help you how to deal with others, which it is not available in a small family. Furthermore, parties in a neuclear family would be small rather than a big family, which it could be a huge party.

To sum up, nowadays people prefer to be in a neuclear family rather than a big family and that is good for thier economy or budjet but it might effect thier personality.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 145, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...or thier economy or budjet but it might effect thier personality.
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, such as, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54827586207 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39718671816 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.41724137931 0.561755894193 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4364032795 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.916666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115903064708 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630455705403 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472530448731 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0716224979566 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471707884818 0.056905535591 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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