The line graph shows the average daily maximum temperatures for Auckland and Christchurch two cities in New Zealand, and London and Edinburgh, two cities in the United Kingdom.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The line graph demonstrates a different average daily temperature throughout the year for Auckland and Christchurch, New Zealand and London and Edinburgh, United Kingdom.
Auckland and Christchurch both summed warmer temperatures during January and February it is about 23-24°C. The temperatures in both cities then lowered steadily, attaining a low of 15°C in Auckland during July and the same with Christchurch in July and August before the outset to rise back up to just over 20°C in December.
Indifference, the data for London and Edinburgh illustrates a temperature of about 5°C in the winter, prior to climbing to a peak of about 23°C during the summer months and 18°C in Edinburgh during the same season.
Overall, the standard daily maximum temperatures of the two cities in New Zealand show fully the opposite habit to the two British cities, although British cities had deeper temperatures than New Zealand on the whole.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 794.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29333333333 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92213772586 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573333333333 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.6073388319 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.8 112.824112599 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 22.9334400587 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415323757808 0.215688989381 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.209794343912 0.103423049105 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147502704165 0.0843802449381 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246283609383 0.15604864568 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144506476703 0.0819641961636 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.2329268293 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 61.2550243902 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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