the graph below shows how money spent on different forms of entertainment over a five-year period
the graph illustrates how people in asia, europe, united state used money in 5 types of entertainment in 1995 and 2000.
overall, the amount of money which spent on entertainment in asia is the smallest while this figure is the highest in US.
in US, total entertainment expense was 184 billion dollars in 1995 compared to 257 billion of dollars in 2000. additionally,publishing always dominated the largest part in both 2 years, about 75 and 125 billion of dollars in 1995 and 2000 respectively. beside, the smallest part is cinema, about 10 billion of dollars.
in asia, about 25 billion of dollars which is the amount of money used in publishing in 1995, slightly higher than this figure in television segment, around 20 billion of dollars. and cinema was still the segment which people spent the least money. however, in 2000, television contributed approximately 50 billion of dollars compared to about 40 billion of dollars of publishing and 10 billion of dollars of cinema.
in europe, similarly, the expense of publishing and television was 75 and 100 billion of dollars compared to just 25 billion of dollars in music video and cinema in both 1995,2000.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, similarly, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 976.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00512820513 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02331070626 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.446153846154 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0987969545 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.444444444 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.08003482462 0.215688989381 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527399785021 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063222291716 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0742468969334 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680422865497 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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