The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrated the information about the number of requests in three forms sent to the Tourist Information Office in once city from January to Jun 2011.
Overall, while the figures for enquiries in term of in person and by telephone increased, those for by letter/email decreased. Interestingly, starting at the lowest point at the beginning, the number of requests made in person soared to end the period surveyed as the highest mean of requests.
In Jan 2011, there was only about more than 400 enquiries received directly from travelers by face-to-face communication. The figure for the forms of letter/email and calling were higher, at somewhere approximately 800 and 850, respectively.
The time between Feb and Apr witnessed contacting in person surpassed two the rest of other methods to be the leader in term of requests generated. In the month Jun 2011, nearly 1900 enquiries performed by in person, compared to about 1600 by letter/email and just only under 400 by phone.
- The widespead use of the Internet gives people more freedom at home instead of going to work or college. Do you think its advantegeous outweigh the disadvantegeous? 89
- Fossil fuels (Coal, oil and natural gas) are the main source in many countries. However, in some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy (wind or solar energy) are encouraged. Do you think that it is positive or negative development? 78
- A few languages are increasingly spoken in different countries while the usage of others is rapidly declining Is this a positive or a negative development 73
- The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007 78
- When designing a building, the most important factor is intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 1.0 24.0651302605 4% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 1615.20841683 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 163.0 315.596192385 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16564417178 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99893967988 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 176.041082164 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59509202454 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 506.74238477 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 18.1175301286 49.4020404114 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 120.285714286 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.28571428571 7.06120827912 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146122703423 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635754487857 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737396754317 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955963111218 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780284607809 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.