The graph below shows the percentage of people in different age groups in one city who attended music concerts between 2010 and 2015.
The line graph compares the proportion of folks who was present in the music show in dissimilar age groups in a city from 2010 to 2015. 0
It is clear that the number of people who appear at the music performance from 16 to 24 was the highest group while inhabitants who over 75 was the smallest group during the period. Between 2010 and 2012, folks in all of the different age groups fluctuated dramatically. The percentage of people who was in age of 45 to 54 decreased sharply to 40%, whereas the group who over 75 years old increased noticeably to 1/5 of total in 2011. The percentage of inhabitants who were in groups from 25 to 44, between 55 and 64 are similar with 30 percent. From 2012 to 2014, the number of people in group between 45 and 54 was nearly stay the same. This was also happened to people in age from 16 to 24 and over 75. After 2014 all of the groups about to urge swiftly, except the group of folks who are between 55 and 64 which had the trend to drop slightly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...period. Between 2010 and 2012, folks in all of the different age groups fluctuated dramati...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 625, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'staid', 'stayed'.
Suggestion: staid; stayed
...e in group between 45 and 54 was nearly stay the same. This was also happened to peo...
^^^^
Line 3, column 718, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...e from 16 to 24 and over 75. After 2014 all of the groups about to urge swiftly, except th...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 802.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.22105263158 4.92477711251 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3498924358 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494736842105 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 221.4 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1442574315 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.25 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362908979995 0.215688989381 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175407249341 0.103423049105 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842645909897 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.324006323809 0.15604864568 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388580204848 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.97 61.2550243902 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.5 10.3012195122 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 11.4140731707 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.