The line graph depicts the information regarding the population of a specific country divided by their age group, starting in 1960 and with a prediction to 2040.
As observed, it is evident that the population is divided into three groups on the basis of their age. The first is from 0 to 14 age secondly from 15 to 64 years old and the last or the old people above 65 years of age. 55% of the population was accounted in 1960 for people between 15 and 64 years old, however it increased by 5% in the next decade. Then, it remained constant for the next 20 years with minor drop in 1980s. It started to gradually dropped by 1990 to 2020 and settled from 60% to 50%, whereas it is believed that it will decline to 45% in the year 2040.
On further analysis, the elders of the above 65 years of age were accounted to 15% in 1960 add a reminder unchanged till the next decade. Meanwhile, it rose significantly by the year 1980 from 15% to 30% in the year 2010. However a rapid rate of increase is predicted till 2020 and would settle to 45% by then. The children less than 14 years of age were 30% of the population in 1960 and reduced by 5% in the next decade, likewise it dropped gradually accounted to only 15% by 2000. Lastly, it is predicted that the population of children will decrease by 5% in the year 2040.
Overall, it is evident that the young ones between 15 and 64 years of age were the least in 1960 and it will increase significantly and forecasted to dominate the population by 2040.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 416, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 1980s'.
Suggestion: in the 1980s
...t for the next 20 years with minor drop in 1980s. It started to gradually dropped by 199...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 222, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... 1980 from 15% to 30% in the year 2010. However a rapid rate of increase is predicted t...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, lastly, likewise, regarding, second, secondly, then, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 33.7804878049 175% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1218.0 965.302439024 126% => OK
No of words: 283.0 196.424390244 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3038869258 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46629946898 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.424028268551 0.547539520022 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 351.9 283.868780488 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9605928948 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231421885441 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101298949266 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0997052234892 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200582079452 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104335365634 0.0819641961636 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.97 61.2550243902 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.5 10.3012195122 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.96 11.4140731707 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.