The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The graph illustrates the population of senior citizens of 100 years starting from 1940 to 2040 of three countries i.e. USA, Japan and Sweden.
The population will increase dramatically from the year 2030 to 3035 in japan. In initial years, the population was decreasing till 1960, it became steady for almost 15 years and after that, it started growing.
The line of USA is a little bit different than japan. it shows zig-zag format. The population kept on rising till 1981, then fallen till 2020 and remained unchanged throughout some period and again escalated significantly.
The graph of Sweden is quite similar to that of USA.The difference is - from 1995 to 2016, the graph of Sweden rose sharply while In USA, it showed approximately no change. Moreover, all the changes occurred in the number of people can be shown significantly as there are sharp curves in the graph unlike usa.
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- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. 61
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 745.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96666666667 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66521531196 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.693333333333 0.547539520022 127% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.4871116896 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.125 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182742376481 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748465961367 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553475156852 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11086048369 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566091051376 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.