The graph indicating rate of population at over 65 in some countries which USA, Japan and Sweden in 1940 and provision to 2040. Three different trend were used for illustrating each countries.
Japans were most young population at 40’s, this rate of old people was steady between %3 and %5 until 2000 for Japan. USA and Sweden had similar trends among 50 years. After 2000, rate of people who at 65 and over in Sweden has rapid increasing up to %20 and then falling down little bit to %17, finally reaching %25 at 2040. For USA proportion of old people remain unchanged between two years 1980 and 2020, next expecting rate is %24 for 2040. There is an unfamiliar line for Japan that is begin rising at 2005, steadily. After 2030 number of over 65 people booming in one or two years from %10 to %27.
To sum up, Japan were youngest nation in 1940 however it is changing, they will have greatest rate at 2040. In USA and Sweden, proportion of old people generally increasing. Peak values of each of country at the end of the graphic. In addition to this world population will get older to compare with 1940’s.
- The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. 78
- In some countries, it is illegal for companies to reject job applicants for their age.Is this a positive or negative development?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.Write at least 250 words. 56
- Universities should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- Television has had a significant influence on the culture of manysocieties. To what extent would you say that television has positivelyor negatively affected the cultural development of your society? 100
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 283, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...reasing up to %20 and then falling down little bit to %17, finally reaching %25 at 2040. F...
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Line 3, column 498, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'begun'.
Suggestion: begun
...is an unfamiliar line for Japan that is begin rising at 2005, steadily. After 2030 nu...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g in one or two years from %10 to %27. To sum up, Japan were youngest nation in...
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Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'were the youngest'.
Suggestion: were the youngest
...s from %10 to %27. To sum up, Japan were youngest nation in 1940 however it is changing, ...
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Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the greatest'.
Suggestion: have the greatest
... 1940 however it is changing, they will have greatest rate at 2040. In USA and Sweden, propor...
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Line 5, column 314, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... get older to compare with 1940's.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, so, then, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60199004975 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40408182382 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611940298507 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1506868771 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0833333333 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15149274899 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591097773287 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500574194801 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132725320547 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669028795589 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.2329268293 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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