The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries
The line chart illustrates the percentage of old people aged 65 and above from 1940 to 2040, a period of 100 years in three different countries.
Overall, Japan has shown a significant increase in the longevity since 2020 onward, whereby Sweden and USA have some similar patterns.
It is worth noting that the biggest rise belonged to USA in 1940, with more than 9% of people aged 65 and above, meanwhile Sweden followed a fairly similar pattern with roughly 7%. Then, both countries witnessed a slight upward trend till 1990, then the figure of Sweden has overtaken USA and increased gradually till 2040, with roughly 25% at that period. After a mild increase after 1980 at 15%, USA has experienced a small drop in 2020 and rose up again in 2040 with 24%.
Throughout the timescale, Japan has a mere minority of citizen aged 65 and over. Japan has followed by a period of stability, especially during 1960 and 1990. Afterward, there has been a rise in the population aged 65 and over in 2005. In 2030, the pattern in Japan has risen dramatically and exceeded two other countries, with 27% of the old population being recorded.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75634517766 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54111492605 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598984771574 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7666650322 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.111111111 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213496397401 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093673093673 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889508144768 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124224201246 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0877744602432 0.0819641961636 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.