The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The graph describes the percentage of people who in age 65 in Japan, Sweden and the USA from 1940 to 2040.
Overall, it is predicted that there will be an increasing in average of number of people aged 65 during this period. Additionally, the proportion in the USA is forecasted to follow a dramatic upward trend.
Looking in the details, in 1940, the number of people was 65 in Japan made up at just 5% while this data in the USA reached the highest place, at nearly 10%. After 22 years, the former witnessed a slightly decrease by 2% before experiencing a sudden and remarkable rise. As a result, it is projected that the percentage of Japanese aged 65 will peaked at the top of the graph at around 23% at the end of this period.
In contrast, though the latter is anticipated to go up in the next 20 years and reach a peak of 28% after dropping slightly by 1%, this percentage in the USA just stood at the third place in 2040. In the other hand, the figure in Sweden abruptly fall in 1990 and also is predicted to decline again in 2030, to 13% and 17% respectively. But then it will climb to above 25% according to predictors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 196, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('slightly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('decrease') instead of another adjective.
...%. After 22 years, the former witnessed a slightly decrease by 2% before experiencing a sudden and ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 346, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'peak'
Suggestion: peak
...the percentage of Japanese aged 65 will peaked at the top of the graph at around 23% a...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, then, third, while, in contrast, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39150943396 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56042584874 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556603773585 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7617613107 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.444444444 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5555555556 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13938795703 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594621041186 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682586497374 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107644328852 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760790859492 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.48 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.