The graph illustrates about the percentage of radio and television audiences in u.k during the year 1992.This basically gives us information about the time of day where the users listen to music and typically when compared to the viewers of the television.
Looking at the details,the percentage of radio listeners is typically high in the morning at 9 a.m. which stands at 28%.Whereas the television audience is very less during mornings and highest at a percentage of 45 % in the evenings.In the graph the only time where both the audiences with a equal percentage around 14 approximately at one in the afternoon.
Overall,it is obvious that tv audiences were more than the radio.The number of radio audience is typically high in percentage during mornings and television audience is more in the evenings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 681.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 132.0 196.424390244 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15909090909 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38956122427 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02311744316 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 71.0 106.607317073 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537878787879 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 22.4926829268 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.674756805 43.030603864 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 227.0 112.824112599 201% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.0 22.9334400587 192% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158895759433 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122364441116 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345420717383 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122364441116 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345420717383 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.9 13.2329268293 188% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.82 61.2550243902 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 10.3012195122 199% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.54 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 11.4329268293 267% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.9970731707 178% => OK
text_standard: 31.0 11.0658536585 280% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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