According to a recent study, the more time people use the Internet, the less time they spend
with real human beings. Some people say that instead of seeing the Internet as a way of
opening up new communication possibilities world wide, we should be concerned about the
effect this is having on social interaction
Internet in recent times has made people get reliable information instantly and more
right than the information by human beings.As the saying a machine can never make a
mistake but a human does defines the people using the internet more consistently.
On one hand,People notice that internet has literally changed the communication between two people,For example two persons travel daily in a same bus but never barely know their name
as they get so involved in the internet either by watching movies or games etc.There is no
personal interaction between people.Before the internet came into place a family everyday
while having dinner shares how the day at work or college was like and have good talk in the
family but at present day they barely talk to each other and everyone is busy either using
the internet either on phone or tablet.
On the other hand,The communication between people improves your ability to think and learn
rather just getting the information online.Like for example,if a student is weak in maths he
searches online to improve his skill but still fails instead if he get a proper personal
guidance by any teacher he would understand it more clearly.Social interaction helps you communicate and get more information how to deal with a situation in life with different views from interaction with individuals more realisticaly.Though you connect through people across the country through skype using internet or message them the real interaction and bonding would always lack in the first place.
To sum up,People should realize and try to change the habit of using the internet for longer time and start communicating and interacting with people more often to make a better communication and bonding with people.
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- People in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example.Discuss the c 56
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but, first, if, so, still, while, for example, to sum up, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3838028169 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88854963678 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591549295775 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 71.0 20.2975951904 350% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 211.237277723 49.4020404114 428% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 382.25 106.682146367 358% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 71.0 20.7667163134 342% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.75 7.06120827912 336% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.38176352705 320% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306612984293 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.215725971829 0.084324248473 256% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0883131045505 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10487787545 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918306292996 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.4 13.0946893788 301% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -0.59 50.2224549098 -1% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.0 11.3001002004 274% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.11 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.4 10.1190380762 300% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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