The graph below shows relative price changes for fresh fruits and vegetables, sugars and sweets, and carbonated drinks between 1978 and 2009.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates that, change of price for fresh fruits and vegetables, sugar and sweets and carbonated drink in the month of January from the year 1978 to 2009.
As can be seen from the line graph that, fresh fruits and vegetables of price slowly increase in the quarter 1978 to 1983. After 1983 it was suddenly dropped in the year from 1983 to 1985. The price change of consumer price index never fell from 1979 to 2009. Consumer price index was the smoothly change of price throughout year.
However, sugar and sweet was slightly different compare to consumer price index. But, in the year 1982 the graph took high change of price, it was 100.The carbonated drinks swelled price from 1979 to 1985, after that it had constant price to the year of 2001 and again slowly swelled from 2001 to 2009.
All in all, it is evident that, fresh fruits and vegetables riched highly, compared to all three things.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'well']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.266666666667 0.268076937826 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.0944444444444 0.116061578633 81% => OK
Adjectives: 0.05 0.0759168565197 66% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0444444444444 0.0366838410393 121% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0222222222222 0.0131127313244 169% => OK
Prepositions: 0.15 0.155750635184 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0333333333333 0.0379272487307 88% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.11115623372 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Infinitives: 0.05 0.0210936926555 237% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0777777777778 0.0948980150116 82% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00555555555556 0.00437022459523 127% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00967000014798 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1050.0 1161.00487805 90% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.9 82% => OK
Chars per words: 6.48148148148 5.90752243213 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73763899035 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.259259259259 0.337110787985 77% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.172839506173 0.247514529752 70% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.111111111111 0.171178102325 65% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0493827160494 0.112407865282 44% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.11115623372 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481481481481 0.546246751206 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 37.9008856291 49.3433353143 77% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 20.25 23.0094962315 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7318252835 42.9750493124 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.25 135.714022679 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 23.0094962315 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.689975730869 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.48048780488 540% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 37.5339506173 47.7609492067 79% => OK
Elegance: 2.79310344828 2.94281807926 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349227406121 0.418131533498 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.259377950948 0.181151798455 143% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.155474055246 0.0850326197045 183% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.727245580869 0.706616315825 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.202992835907 0.157042692854 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.19434499474 0.228904883108 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138218497567 0.108899403657 127% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.419088907994 0.367819155151 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.221425845977 0.0812612215331 272% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278077672516 0.316326947829 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137415655634 0.0921553760075 149% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70731707317 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.08536585366 98% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.16585365854 126% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.02926829268 132% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 7.1512195122 112% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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