The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The graph includes information about many changes in the percentage of elderly people, who are aged 65 or more, in the three countries, during past 80 years and projected proportion until 2040.
Overall, it indicates that in spit of some initial fluctuation, thsi figure for all countries rose gradually and predictions show that this trend will continue and grow with more steep, especially in japan.
In 1940, only 5% of japan’s population consisted from elderly people, while this figure for others was slightly higher and stood at about 7% for sweden and nearly 9% for the us. A gradual increase was seen in the us and sweden, with figures rising to roughly 15% in the late 90s. At this time, japan experienced a different path. The percentage of elderly people in this country dropped slightly for 2 decades, reached about 2.5% in 1960, maintained in this level for 20 years, before rising to 1940 figure in the early 2000.
The percentage of Americans aged more than 64, maintain fewer than 15% until 2020, while prediction shows that in the last 20 years, an increase of 9% will occur in this country. Despite an increase of 5% then dropping of 2% until 2030 in terms of sweden old people, it is anticipated that this percentage rise constantly in the last decade, reaching 25% in 2040. A stable increase will be done in the proportion of Japanese who will be aged 65 or more, with projected figure rises to 10% in 2030, before experiencing an increase of up 20% in last decade.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 965.302439024 130% => OK
No of words: 260.0 196.424390244 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82692307692 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5720850106 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 106.607317073 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561538461538 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 283.868780488 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.8976730698 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.444444444 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8888888889 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156103814556 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660958722528 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717619810167 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106847764205 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0903679135668 0.0819641961636 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.