The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph illustrates number of passengers in Underground Station in different time during a day.

The trend is not linear, it increases and decrease significantly.
The lowest level is at 6 am and 4 pm: in these graph shows that there are one hundred passengers.
The trend goes up dramatically and after two hours there are about four times passengers than at 6 am. In particular, at 8.00 passenger numbers is the greatest level at all.

Successively, there is a sharp fall, and between 10 and 12 the trend grows a bit. Afer, it remain stable until 14. In the next two hours of the day, there is a dramatic decrease that has the lowest value at 16, with only 100 persons. At 19 the number is approximately 400, very similar to 8, but later on the trend goes down significantly.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... increases and decrease significantly. The lowest level is at 6 am and 4 pm: in th...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...that there are one hundred passengers. The trend goes up dramatically and after tw...
^^^
Line 8, column 92, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'remains'?
Suggestion: remains
... and 12 the trend grows a bit. Afer, it remain stable until 14. In the next two hours ...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, in particular

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 649.0 965.302439024 67% => OK
No of words: 141.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60283687943 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8299916384 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631205673759 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 189.9 283.868780488 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.7555954518 43.030603864 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.1111111111 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119515627886 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525030008086 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073804098205 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0823740442796 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853435830211 0.0819641961636 104% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.2329268293 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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