The graph shows the value in US dollars in millions of dollars of investment in funds of four categories from 1988 to 2014

Essay topics:

The graph shows the value in US dollars (in millions of dollars) of investment in funds of four categories from 1988 to 2014.

The line graph demonstrates the value of US dollars invested in funds of four financial assets, including gold, company shares, fine art and property, in the 26-year period, from 1988 to 2014.

Overall, the investment funds of all four categories experienced substantial increase in the period of 16 years. Noticeably, gold was always the most prominent investment fund among the others from 2006 to 2014, and it also underwent the most dramatic upward trend.

Firstly, according to the chart, the investment in both gold and company shares witnessed noticeable growth all over the period. In 1988, about 50 million dollars was consumed in company shares, while gold was twice as much as that of company shares, at 100 million. After drastic fluctuation in the 10-year period, from 1988 to 1998, the investment in gold rose dramatically to peak at 450 million in 2012. Meanwhile, the amount of money used in company shares varied sharply in the first five years, then climbing considerably to hit the highest point of 250 million in 2014.

Otherwise, there were fluctuations in the investments in fine art and property. In 1994, the amount of money invested in fine art was at the same point as the figure for property, at over 50 million dollars. In the following years, remarkable variations were seen in the money used in fine art before reaching a peak of nearly 350 million in 2014, which far exceeded that of property in the same year, at just under 200 million dollars.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 965.302439024 128% => OK
No of words: 250.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.952 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61785866693 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 283.868780488 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 3.36585365854 357% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.812560832 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.8 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324191761491 0.215688989381 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126348077862 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104739689758 0.0843802449381 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219487095892 0.15604864568 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11898987522 0.0819641961636 145% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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