The graphs below show the numbers of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995 in several employment sectors of the republic of Freedonia.
The two provided charts give data about the work force in Freedonia divided by gender in various labour categories. The top one is from 1975 while the bottom is from 1995. As a general trend working women have increased considerably while the number of men remained virtually static. It is also notable that the public and market sector have the highest number of employees whether men or women whereas the defense sector attracted the least individuals.
Women in communications have grown from about 250,000 female worker in 1975 to over 600,000, exceeding the male employees whose figures stayed at about 300,000 and accounting for the largest increase in the number of women in any sector. In addition to that, women have also exceeded men in sale related positions being about 800,000 compared to 700,000 of men in 1995. Conversely, the areas of of manufacturing and the public sector demonstrated practically no change in the numbers of female labour force, remaining at about 300,000 and 650,000 respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...rom 1975 while the bottom is from 1995. As a general trend working women have incr...
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Suggestion:
...orker in 1975 to over 600,000, exceeding the male employees whose figures stayed ...
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Suggestion: of
...0 of men in 1995. Conversely, the areas of of manufacturing and the public sector dem...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'conversely', 'so', 'whereas', 'while', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25988700565 0.268076937826 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.124293785311 0.116061578633 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0790960451977 0.0759168565197 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.045197740113 0.0366838410393 123% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00564971751412 0.0131127313244 43% => OK
Prepositions: 0.197740112994 0.155750635184 127% => OK
Participles: 0.0621468926554 0.0379272487307 164% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.7038463917 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0169491525424 0.0210936926555 80% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.107344632768 0.0948980150116 113% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00564971751412 0.00967000014798 58% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1019.0 1161.00487805 88% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.9 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.13855421687 5.90752243213 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73763899035 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.403614457831 0.337110787985 120% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.28313253012 0.247514529752 114% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.156626506024 0.171178102325 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.114457831325 0.112407865282 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7038463917 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602409638554 0.546246751206 110% => OK
Word variations: 54.0775127187 49.3433353143 110% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 8.93414634146 78% => OK
Sentence length: 23.7142857143 23.0094962315 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6101591071 42.9750493124 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.571428571 135.714022679 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 23.0094962315 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 0.689975730869 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.84146341463 52% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.48048780488 203% => OK
Readability: 52.0275387263 47.7609492067 109% => OK
Elegance: 2.96774193548 2.94281807926 101% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.47785470989 0.418131533498 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.189203149007 0.181151798455 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.100302483993 0.0850326197045 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.632530268325 0.706616315825 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.122615612795 0.157042692854 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.250895809862 0.228904883108 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101527498592 0.108899403657 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.401230880018 0.367819155151 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0 0.0812612215331 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.398560988167 0.316326947829 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234088550396 0.0921553760075 25% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70731707317 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.08536585366 49% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.16585365854 126% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.02926829268 66% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 7.1512195122 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.