The graphs below show the post-school qualifications held by Australians in the age groups 25 to 34 and 55 to 69.
The pie charts compares the percentage of Australian aged from 25-34 and 55 to 69 holds the post school qualifications in distinctive fields.
Overall, the number of people owns post-school qualifications between 25 and 34 is much higher than that of people in age group of 55 to 69 years old. In addition,
Look at the pie charts for more details, we can see that there are the majority of citizens in Australia who have degrees in social sciences and art; Science, Math and IT; and Administration, at roughly 19% in the age group of 25 to 34. In the age of 55 to 69, the rate in those majors fluctuate significantly at 20.42%, 10.11%, and 14.9% respectively.
In the meantime, the rate of people who have qualifications of agriculture, architecture, and others accounts for the smallest proportion in this country. In the age group of 25-34, the figures are around 2% and the similar pattern is recorded in the age group of 55 to 69.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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...he smallest proportion in this country. In the age group of 25-34, the figures are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 779.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69277108434 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01511289869 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55421686747 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.1786987931 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.833333333 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6666666667 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.437447197673 0.215688989381 203% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.231959142013 0.103423049105 224% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149453910168 0.0843802449381 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.296382401935 0.15604864568 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0976873852661 0.0819641961636 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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