The graphs show changes in spending habits of people in the UK between 1971 and 2001.
The pie chart illustrates the percentage of money inhabitants spending on their preferences measured in the United Kingdom during the period of 30 years.
It can clearly be seen that, in the first year of the survey, the cost of petrol made up the highest proportion of the residents’ spending, while books reached the lowest number of the cost British spent on in 2001.
According to the given information, in the year of 1971, 7% was the percentage of computers' expense, which was just about one fifth of that number for petrol (36%). Furthermore, it is noticeable that the figure for the charge of furniture outnumbered that of restaurants (32% and 25%, respectively).
As illustrated, in 2001, British witnessed a significant increase in money paying out for cars (43%), while in 1971, there were no statistics about this. There was a similar pattern of the percentage of how much money spending on furniture and petrol (8%). Besides, restaurants and foods also had a fairly equal proportion of expenditure (14%). Books gained the lowest number of that survey, just 1%.
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- Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited bytourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be doneto attract more local people to visit these places? 67
- Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 84
- As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree of disagree? 84
- People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited bytourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be doneto attract more local people to visit these places? 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 163, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re no statistics about this. There was a similar pattern of the percentage of how...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90216876918 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586592178771 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1454502004 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.875 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0782069054495 0.215688989381 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.030247754095 0.103423049105 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0270758552956 0.0843802449381 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0446237127877 0.15604864568 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194074932898 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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