Life cycle of frog

Essay topics:

Life cycle of frog

The diagram illustrate the different stages involved in the life cycle of frog. There are six stages.
Overall tadpole, emerge from in the water. After, that going to land maturing adult frog. Firstly, frig lay egg in water after that embryo develop the tadpole. They have thin body and long tail. It is their development stage during this foots appear. The tadpole grow in to young frog. After, that in tadpole start the pulmonary breathing it means to develop their heart in the frog.
Then that they can go in land because they are already grow up. They have walk on foot and to find out food on land.
Life cycle of frog started put eggs and end to become adult frog.

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Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'illustrates'.
Suggestion: illustrates
The diagram illustrate the different stages involved in the li...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 44, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rall tadpole, emerge from in the water. After, that going to land maturing adult frog...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 287, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ear. The tadpole grow in to young frog. After, that in tadpole start the pulmonary br...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'walked'.
Suggestion: walked
...use they are already grow up. They have walk on foot and to find out food on land. ...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 553.0 965.302439024 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 122.0 196.424390244 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53278688525 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.32345618554 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.95537764814 2.65546596893 74% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647540983607 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 167.4 283.868780488 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 22.4926829268 44% => Sentence length is too short
Sentence length SD: 20.404758432 43.030603864 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 46.0833333333 112.824112599 41% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.1666666667 22.9334400587 44% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.09268292683 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333992030703 0.215688989381 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120002540658 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.18650687906 0.0843802449381 221% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271170024757 0.15604864568 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.221543373443 0.0819641961636 270% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.0 13.2329268293 38% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.25 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.3012195122 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.51 11.4140731707 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 11.4329268293 31% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.9970731707 55% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 5.0 11.0658536585 45% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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