The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.
The graph illustrates how frequent per year Australian teenagers consume Pizza, Fish and Chips, and Hamburgers between the year 1975 until 2000.
Overall, Fish and Chips had a dramatic fall in the number of times Australian teenagers consume fast foods, while Pizza and Hamburger had a sharp inclination at the beginning and stood steady for the last five years of the report.
Out of the three types of fast foods in almost three decades, Australian adolescence preferred Fish and Chips, that was eaten one-hundred times in 1975, whereas, Pizza and Hamburgers are approximately eight and ten respectively. While Fish and Chips started at the top, it had a period of volatility around 1980 to 1985 and progressively declined through the years and stopped at almost forty, being the lowest among the three.
On the other hand, there is an opposite trend with Pizza and Hamburger consistently inclined from 1975 until the year 2000. Started being the second from the first year of survey, Hamburgers became the fast food of choice among teens around 1987 at one-hundred one. While the trend for fish and chips continued to descend from 1985, Pizza became the second popular easy to get food, reported to have been consumed eighty-five times last 2000.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, whereas, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12560386473 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5508161307 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.9157275535 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.571428571 112.824112599 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5714285714 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217037269255 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111437782886 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584643911664 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145060049399 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483771250545 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.2329268293 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.