The line graph depicts the information about the two countries england and wales population size, birth and death rates between 1700 and 2000
Initiating at 5 million in 1700 and rise had experienced twofold by 1750, the population of england and wales remained stable up to 1800 , whereas last four year sharply increased at 50 millions.
With regards to England and wales, in birth and death rates were equal in starting year at 25 millions then both rates peaked at by 35 millions before decreasing dramatically to 25 millions to 1850 and 20 millions in 2000, while in 1950 birth rate was increasing up to 35 millions .
Overall, starting year the both rates increased five times as compared to population, whereas in 1850 population surpass at 25 millions and peaked at 50 millions in the last year.
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- The bar graph shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006. 73
- The line graph below shows the population size, birth rate and the death rate of England and Wales from 1700 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- The number of older people is increasing some people think that this will cause problems in their countries,other believe this group is important to society .discuss both views and give your own opinion. 56
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...and and wales remained stable up to 1800 , whereas last four year sharply increase...
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Line 5, column 281, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...th rate was increasing up to 35 millions . Overall, starting year the both rate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 674.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 137.0 196.424390244 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9197080292 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42121322205 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63234647578 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56204379562 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 182.7 283.868780488 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 22.4926829268 200% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.5782747348 43.030603864 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 224.666666667 112.824112599 199% => OK
Words per sentence: 45.6666666667 22.9334400587 199% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227694779254 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169509997716 0.103423049105 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103232811727 0.0843802449381 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182342751462 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155860386865 0.0819641961636 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.6 13.2329268293 186% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.3012195122 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.4329268293 249% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.9970731707 182% => OK
text_standard: 29.0 11.0658536585 262% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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