THE MAP BELOW SHOW THE CHANGES THAT TOOK PLACE IN THE TOWN AT THE SEASIDE RESORT OF BEACH BETWEEN 1950 AND 1990.
Misa:Given are the three maps delineating the transformation of in the town at the seaside resort of beach over a phase of 40 years,commencing from 1950.
Perceptibly,the town at the seaside resort had sustained changes from the poor sea to a develop tourist area over a forty-year period.Similarly,the booming of hotel,road,pool.
In 1950,the Beach huts in the center covered by villas in 1970,therefore which was knocked down to make way for the hotel in 1990.In the west of the Beach huts,Sand dunes was reduced a half size in 1970 .In addition in 1990 many trees were been planned which developed Landscaped Gardens.While the presence of swimming pool of the Northeast was grown in 1990. In the east in 1950 track was flourished to Road in 1970 then which was expand in 1990.The same direction woodlands in 1950 was redesigned Caravan Park in 1970
Which was futher turned into a car park in 1990.Additional development is that Surf School at the beach in 1990.
The seaside resort of beach attracted more tourist with the beautiful scenery.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Given) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
Misa:Given are the three maps delineating the transfor...
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Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , commencing
...resort of beach over a phase of 40 years,commencing from 1950. Perceptibly,the town at the...
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Line 2, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...years,commencing from 1950. Perceptibly,the town at the seaside resort had sustaine...
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Line 2, column 87, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... sustained changes from the poor sea to a develop tourist area over a forty-year period.S...
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Line 2, column 134, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Similarly
...p tourist area over a forty-year period.Similarly,the booming of hotel,road,pool. In 195...
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Line 2, column 143, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
... area over a forty-year period.Similarly,the booming of hotel,road,pool. In 1950,th...
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Line 2, column 164, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , road
...ar period.Similarly,the booming of hotel,road,pool. In 1950,the Beach huts in the ce...
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Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
... down to make way for the hotel in 1990.In the west of the Beach huts,Sand dunes w...
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Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Sand
...el in 1990.In the west of the Beach huts,Sand dunes was reduced a half size in 1970 ....
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Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...nd dunes was reduced a half size in 1970 .In addition in 1990 many trees were been...
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Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
... dunes was reduced a half size in 1970 .In addition in 1990 many trees were been p...
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Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... dunes was reduced a half size in 1970 .In addition in 1990 many trees were been p...
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Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...nes was reduced a half size in 1970 .In addition in 1990 many trees were been planned wh...
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Line 3, column 288, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: While
...nned which developed Landscaped Gardens.While the presence of swimming pool of the No...
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Line 3, column 288, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nned which developed Landscaped Gardens.While the presence of swimming pool of the No...
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Line 3, column 371, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Northeast was grown in 1990. In the east in 1950 track was flourished to Road in ...
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Line 3, column 433, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'expanded'.
Suggestion: expanded
...ourished to Road in 1970 then which was expand in 1990.The same direction woodlands in...
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Line 3, column 448, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...d in 1970 then which was expand in 1990.The same direction woodlands in 1950 was re...
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Line 3, column 499, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rection woodlands in 1950 was redesigned Caravan Park in 1970 Which was futher ...
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Line 3, column 521, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...950 was redesigned Caravan Park in 1970 Which was futher turned into a car park ...
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Line 4, column 49, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Additional
...s futher turned into a car park in 1990.Additional development is that Surf School at the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, similarly, so, then, therefore, while, in addition, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 6.8 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26858141857 2.65546596893 123% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594285714286 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.4926829268 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.4264192176 43.030603864 229% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 175.0 112.824112599 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.0 22.9334400587 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6 5.23603664747 241% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 1.69756097561 1237% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284544639471 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167843533253 0.103423049105 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613935401669 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171896516006 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592055073893 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.2329268293 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.9970731707 145% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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