the map below shows the changes in the spanish city of Castellon in recent times
The map illustrates the developmets that have taken place in Spanish country of Castellon over the period of 20 years.
Overall, the city has underwent dramatic transformation, which become more built-up.
The main road was turned into pedestrian road and city centre was updated bike rental scheme. University located in the south of the map was remained unchaged in 2020 and trees on the right of university were cut down to make a new shopping centre. A hall of residence was built on the right of the university. To the east of the map, police station and new shop were constructed in the place of train station and old market respectively.
An airport and new covered market appeared in the west of the city. There was a construction of new train station opposite the university and a tramline was created to provide an easy access for people. Recreational facilities such as a cinema, bars and clubs appeared along the port.
- the map below shows the changes in the spanish city of Castellon in recent times 78
- online communication is becoming more popular than face to face communication in many companies Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 70
- Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV ot playing computer games for children To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
- The use of social media is replacing face to face contact in this century Do you think the advantages of this way outweigh the disadvantages 61
- Some children can learn more efficiently by watching tv Therefore children should watch tv regularly both in school and at home Do you agree or disagree 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The map illustrates the developmets that...
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Line 4, column 23, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'undergone'.
Suggestion: undergone
...iod of 20 years. Overall, the city has underwent dramatic transformation, which become m...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'An' instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: An
...n station and old market respectively. A airport and new covered market appeared...
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Line 6, column 174, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'easy access'.
Suggestion: easy access
...t and a tramline was created to provide an easy access for peole. Recreational facilities such...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 776.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74761260006 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60625 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1919783313 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2222222222 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.22222222222 5.23603664747 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10032790794 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382619986507 0.103423049105 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492552574929 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0701064849314 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588540541454 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.