The map below shows the present and proposed facilities of a university and the pie charts compare the percentages of engineering and medical students.
The map shows two types of facilities, namely present and proposed which are provided by a university, whereas the pie charts compare and contrast data on the changes in the quantity of engineering and medical students. Overall, as can be seen from pictures, nowadays there are known to be only three existing facilities whereas in 2025 this number will be significantly changed, in addition to this three out of four quarters is made by the percentage of medical students while the percentages of technical students accounted for 25 percent.
First of all, having looked at the map, it should be acknowledged that at the moment the MedTech College provides only two facilities which are dedicated to education (the Medical Building and the Technical Building) and these two buildings have the identical external layout. Next, the remaining building, which provides its service, is restaurant and in 2025 this restaurant will be surrounded by the Hall of Residence and the Sport Complex. In addition to this, the Lecture Halls, the Faculty Office, and the Library will have been built.
After that, the percentage of medical students makes up exactly 75% which is over three times as large as the percentage of technical students which accounts for 25%. By 2025 the number of medical students will be still higher but the difference between two quantities will be only 10% (55% and 45% respectively).
- Modern technology is changing our world This has advantages such as bringing people closer together throught communication It also has disadvantages such as destroying the difference between cultures To what extent do you agree or disagree with this state 89
- Some educationalists argue that non exam art based subjects such as music drama art and craft shoud be compulsory in the secondary school curriculum They believe that activities such as these can improve overall academic performance To what extent do you 84
- Recycling is now an essential measure it is time for everyone in society to become more responsible towards the environment To what extent do you agree of disagree with this statement 84
- The map below shows the present and proposed facilities of a university and the pie charts compare the percentages of engineering and medical students 72
- The amount of sport shown on television every week has increased significantly and this is having impact on live sports events Do you think the benefits of having more televised sport are greater than the disadvantages 80
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, still, whereas, while, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1169.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 230.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08260869565 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72829118293 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560869565217 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 283.868780488 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.4642065056 43.030603864 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.0 112.824112599 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8571428571 22.9334400587 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.23603664747 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240480488136 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107882531954 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112715690872 0.0843802449381 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171291660748 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114351100286 0.0819641961636 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.2329268293 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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