The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
The maps illustrate current structure and the proposed future developments the central business district of Islip.
Overall, there are fewer structures in the current map of the centre of a small town of Islip whereas in the future plan for the renovations of the central business district of Islip, the roads infrastructure shall be improved and together with the construction of a shopping centre and a walking path for pedestrians only.
At present, the centre of Islip town has fewer structures as compared to the proposed future plan.There is a countryside to the north of the town and the parking space seems to be bigger than in the future plan.
The upcoming plan for Islip central business district,the road network shall be improved with the construction of the dual carriage way which will connects the centre of the town in all directions in a circular manner.The northen part will have the bus station, new housing and the pedestrian walking path constructed.The car park on the south-eastern part of the centre of the town has been reduced in size comparatively to the present structure.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...central business district of Islip, the roads infrastructure shall be improved and to...
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...for pedestrians only. At present, the centre of Islip town has fewer structure...
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...r structures as compared to the proposed future plan.There is a countryside to th...
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...e town and the parking space seems to be bigger than in the future plan. The u...
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...plan for Islip central business district,the road network shall be improved with th...
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...iness district,the road network shall be improved with the construction of the du...
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...tion of the dual carriage way which will connects the centre of the town in all d...
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...he centre of the town in all directions in a circular manner.The northen part will have the bus stat...
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...the pedestrian walking path constructed.The car park on the south-eastern part of ...
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...ructed.The car park on the south-eastern part of the centre of the town has been ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07103825137 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97254700774 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508196721311 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 22.4926829268 200% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 124.748747489 43.030603864 290% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 232.0 112.824112599 206% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.75 22.9334400587 199% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270630071205 0.215688989381 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177677144583 0.103423049105 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748815421983 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177677144583 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748815421983 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.3 13.2329268293 191% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 61.2550243902 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 10.3012195122 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.9970731707 182% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.