The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , and
...ll city called Islip at the present time,and how it will look in the future. Over...
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Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , as
...w it will look in the future. Overall,as can be seen from the maps,lots of chang...
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Line 3, column 37, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , lots
... Overall,as can be seen from the maps,lots of changes will be made in this town.Ne...
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Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: New
...ts of changes will be made in this town.New buildings will be erected and there wil...
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Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...buildings will be erected and there will be some changes on the roads. From th...
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Line 6, column 38, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , we
... From the plan of development of Islip,we can see that a new dual carriageway wil...
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Suggestion: Furthermore
...ew dual carriageway will be constructed.Furthermore,two new housings will be built in North...
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Line 6, column 109, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , two
...riageway will be constructed.Furthermore,two new housings will be built in North and...
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Line 6, column 172, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Also
...be built in North and South of the town.Also park will decrease in size. It is no...
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Line 6, column 172, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...be built in North and South of the town.Also park will decrease in size. It is no...
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Line 8, column 48, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , it
...oticeable that in the northwest of Islip,it is planned to create a large area for e...
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Line 8, column 110, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , shopping
...te a large area for erecting bus station,shopping centre and car park.Moreover,the main r...
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Line 8, column 140, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Moreover
...us station,shopping centre and car park.Moreover,the main road will have a circular form...
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Suggestion: , the
...on,shopping centre and car park.Moreover,the main road will have a circular form,whi...
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Line 8, column 188, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , while
...,the main road will have a circular form,while the central part of the town will take ...
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Suggestion: In
... a road which is for pedestrians solely.In addition,shops that are in the north of...
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Suggestion: , shops
...ch is for pedestrians solely.In addition,shops that are in the north of Islip will be ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, look, moreover, so, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 1.00243902439 1197% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 684.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 140.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88571428571 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43979062825 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47395557642 2.65546596893 131% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 201.6 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.4926829268 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.1986394453 43.030603864 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 171.0 112.824112599 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.0 22.9334400587 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.25 5.23603664747 272% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 1.69756097561 1001% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124219347067 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842922783903 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510659952631 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.068024386486 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562503156863 0.0819641961636 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.2329268293 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.9970731707 145% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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