the maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
the graphical representation compares the Small Island before and after the development carried out for tourism purposes.The area was ranged in 100 metres which is clearly and coherently representated.
to begin with,we can see that there is a no development in the area around hundred metres it had been seen that before development there have some trees in west side of the island and some are in East and north east direction we can also observed as there was a sea in the south direction.furthermore, After development it has been constructed in the form of accommodation in the West south direction.
secondly, they are built restaurant in the north east direction for the people use. Moreover, they give swimming facilities to the people near by the beach which is in the west direction of the island. Apart from this, it has been constructed the footpath for the people to walk in morning time and they also built vehicle track for the people to visited to a restaurant or to accommodation for their use.
overall,it is evident that accommodation and other facilities for tourists were built and a pirate was constructed to permit access to the island by boat.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, moreover, second, secondly, so, apart from, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95454545455 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09473998421 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494949494949 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.881269216 43.030603864 239% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 163.5 112.824112599 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 22.9334400587 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6666666667 5.23603664747 242% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155267179215 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073190359463 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051051988972 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100098196469 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388565595465 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.2329268293 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 11.4329268293 262% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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