The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in differnet categories.
The bar graph reveals the imformation about the the unpaid work done by the men and women in the number of hours per week.
It can be seen that,married women has been done their work 30hours per week such as housework,gardening etc. In addition to this,men has spend 18 hours per week as compared to women in household work.
As far as trend was concerned, when children enter in a house unpaid work done by the women was increasing to 52 hours.Apart from all this, men has spend same hours in housework having children in their home.
Interstingly, married women with 3 children has rise in their working hours that was 56 hours.Furthermore, men decresing their work when 3 or more children enter in house.
overall,it is evident that women has been done the more household work per week as compared to men .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , married
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Suggestion: , gardening
... work 30hours per week such as housework,gardening etc. In addition to this,men has spend ...
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Suggestion: , men
...ework,gardening etc. In addition to this,men has spend 18 hours per week as compared...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
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Suggestion: Apart
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Message: Use past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
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Suggestion: risen
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Suggestion: Furthermore
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Suggestion: .
...usehold work per week as compared to men .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, apart from, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 678.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 143.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74125874126 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90191374701 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 190.8 283.868780488 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.121847063 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.23603664747 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25614083416 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169735312779 0.103423049105 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652124021478 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179196370267 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744716339626 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 40.7170731707 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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