The line graph shows the imformation about the dubai gold sales 2002 for 12 month in 2002 in millions of dirhams.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 82, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...about the sales of gold in Dubai for 12 month by the year of 2002.The data is calibra...
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Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... Dubai for 12 month by the year of 2002.The data is calibrated in millions of dirha...
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Line 2, column 67, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '200 million'.
Suggestion: 200 million
... month of January the sales of gold was 200 millions of dirhams and in February it was slightly...
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Line 2, column 136, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '230 million'.
Suggestion: 230 million
...n February it was slightly increased by 230 millions of dirhams.In addition to this sales were ...
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Line 2, column 159, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ly increased by 230 millions of dirhams.In addition to this sales were risen up a...
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Line 2, column 189, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f dirhams.In addition to this sales were risen up at the highest peak by 350 mill...
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Line 2, column 223, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '350 million'.
Suggestion: 350 million
...s were risen up at the highest peak by 350 millions of dirhams in the march.Moreover, from Mar...
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Line 2, column 260, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...by 350 millions of dirhams in the march.Moreover, from March to July it dramatically dec...
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Line 2, column 317, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '120 billion'.
Suggestion: 120 billion
...rch to July it dramatically declined by 120 billions of dirhams. As far as trend was concerned...
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Line 2, column 342, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ly declined by 120 billions of dirhams. As far as trend was concerned sales again ...
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Line 3, column 51, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '210 million'.
Suggestion: 210 million
...trend was concerned sales again grow by 210 millions of dirhams in the month of July to August....
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Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
... dirhams in the month of July to August.A part from all this the sales was drop a...
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Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...september month by 120 millions drihams.Therefore,from October to November the sale was r...
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Line 3, column 203, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , from
... month by 120 millions drihams.Therefore,from October to November the sale was remain...
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Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'remained'.
Suggestion: remained
...e,from October to November the sale was remain steady in last month of December and it...
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Line 3, column 311, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '190 million'.
Suggestion: 190 million
...f December and it was small increase by 190 millions of dirhams. overall,it is evident that sa...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Overall
...l increase by 190 millions of dirhams. overall,it is evident that sakes increased more...
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Line 4, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...ase by 190 millions of dirhams. overall,it is evident that sakes increased more in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, therefore, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 788.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5549132948 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8459272093 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485549132948 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 230.4 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 22.4926829268 191% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.583298812 43.030603864 234% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 197.0 112.824112599 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.25 22.9334400587 189% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 1.69756097561 1060% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363518161647 0.215688989381 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.255362948291 0.103423049105 247% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.164388174763 0.0843802449381 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255362948291 0.15604864568 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.164388174763 0.0819641961636 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.6 13.2329268293 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 10.3012195122 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.0 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.9970731707 175% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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