the chart below shows the total number of minutes in billions of telephone calls in the UK divided into three categories from 1995 to 2002

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the chart below shows the total number of minutes in billions of telephone calls in the UK divided into three categories from 1995 to 2002

The bar graph depicts the information about the UK Calls which has been categorised into 3 sections from the year of 1995 to 2002.The data is calibrated in minutes.
It can be seen that in 1995 local calls were spend 72 billions of minutes on telephone calls. whereas, national and international or mobile calls spend 37 or 5 minutes on telephone calls in UK.In addition to this in 1996 to 1999 local calls,national and international or mobile calls are slowly increased our billions of minute that is 90, 50 and 30 respectively.
As far as trend was concerned in the year of 2000 there was steady decline observed in the local call minutes that is 85 billions of minutes.But, national and international calls or mobile calls are increased their billions of minutes as compared to the previous years.Apart from all this in the year of 2001 to 2002 there was again declined shows in local calls that is 78 or 72 billions of minutes in uk. whereas,national and International calls are stable by 60 billions of minutes and mobile calls little increased in their minutes.
overall, it is evident that local calls has more billions of minutes in year of1999 and less was in 1995 by the mobile calls.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...an be seen that in 1995 local calls were spend 72 billions of minutes on telephon...
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...en that in 1995 local calls were spend 72 billions of minutes on telephone calls. whereas, na...
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...7 or 5 minutes on telephone calls in UK.In addition to this in 1996 to 1999 local...
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...elephone calls in UK.In addition to this in 1996 to 1999 local calls,national and...
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...ined shows in local calls that is 78 or 72 billions of minutes in uk. whereas,national and Int...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, whereas, apart from, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74162679426 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8583861806 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468899521531 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.045352441 43.030603864 253% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 165.166666667 112.824112599 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.8333333333 22.9334400587 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 1.69756097561 1060% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318848428904 0.215688989381 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186574341203 0.103423049105 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319528109376 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205835873305 0.15604864568 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366754704072 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.89 61.2550243902 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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