The maps illustrate the changes of the stostokeford village that have taken place from 1930 to 2010. overall, the village many changes from farmland to the houses and roads, but the river and bridge are still a same.
In the last time at 1930 so many farmlands in the stostokeford village, the farmland is spread in the village, but at 2010 a farmland was removed at all, that is has been changed houses and roads.
the primary school was developing a two building in the east side, and in the western of primary school has been a change this a 2 shoop a removed and building new roads and houses, same in the south side of the village, a farmland is changing a road and houses.
Furthermore, the last changed in the village is a gardens area in the central village, the garden has been changed a for 4 retirement house.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...llage that have taken place from 1930 to 2010. overall, the village many changes ...
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Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Overall
...at have taken place from 1930 to 2010. overall, the village many changes from farmland...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... is has been changed houses and roads. the primary school was developing a two bui...
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Line 4, column 51, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'gardens'' or 'garden's'?
Suggestion: gardens'; garden's
...e, the last changed in the village is a gardens area in the central village, the garden...
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Line 4, column 135, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'house' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'houses'.
Suggestion: houses
...den has been changed a for 4 retirement house.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 675.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4701986755 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47733464947 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 106.607317073 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496688741722 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 201.6 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.2736028937 43.030603864 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2 22.9334400587 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0551293438339 0.215688989381 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438186908688 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445483886191 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0390382896749 0.15604864568 25% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039204454169 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.41 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.24 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 40.7170731707 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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