The pictures illustrate the cause of less farm produce in North America, Europe and Oceania during 1990-2000. Looking more closely to the picture, there were three main factors is observed.
According to the pie chart, over-grazing accounted for 35% where it was the main reason for less product in the late 19th century. It is followed by deforestation and over-cultivation at 30% and 28% respectively. The minority cause is other which affected only 7%. Furthermore, Europe had the most soil problem at almost one-fourth, consists of deforestation, over-cultivation and over-grazing at 9.8%, 7.7% and 5.5% respectively. On the other hand, only 5% of land degraded were found in North America. Their over-cultivation responsible for 3.3% of total. However, Oceania maintain their position at the middle at 13%. Most of it came from over-grazing at 11.3% Interestingly, there were not found the evidence of over-cultivation in Oceania.
In conclusion, over-grazing is the biggest issue for agriculture in the world during the 1990s.
- The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- Nowadays it is easy to apply for and be given a credit card. However, some people experience problems when they are not be able to pay their debts back. In your opinion, do the advantages of credit cards outweigh the disadvantages? 56
- The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, look, so, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46583850932 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.43236130442 2.65546596893 129% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1363333737 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6363636364 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117351559674 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500101316019 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523727117943 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105942339777 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310919464138 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.85 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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