The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year.
The pie charts show the quantity of incomings and outgoings over a year of a children charitable organization based in the USA.
Overall, donated food accounted for the majority of imcome while program services represented the greatest proportion of expenditures. Furthermore, Total revenue sources just exceeded outgoings.
The donated food comprised the highest percentage of entire revenue at 86,6 %, being approximately six times the figure for the total earnings of other sectors. The community contributions and program revenue followed with just over 10% and 2% respectively. The lowest proportions of revenue earned from other income and goverment grants with the entire revenue of them at just under 1%.
Regarding expenditure, the children’s charity allocated the largest percentage of money to program services at 95,8%, being almost the total outgoings. The amount of money spent on fundraising constituted the second-highest proportion at 2,6% which was slightly more than the percentage of the fund used for management. According to the illustration, this charity organization earned exactly $53, 561,580 in this year and used up $53,224,896. Their saving in this year was just over 330,000 dollars.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 76, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a child' or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: a child; children
... incomings and outgoings over a year of a children charitable organization based in the U...
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Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ngs over a year of a children charitable organization based in the USA. Overa...
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Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ore, Total revenue sources just exceeded outgoings. The donated food comprised...
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Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...with just over 10% and 2% respectively. The lowest proportions of revenue earned fr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, regarding, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69398907104 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1334526516 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590163934426 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0410583002 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.2 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172883904172 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656602487873 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896068413814 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117732104315 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123577627322 0.0819641961636 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 11.4140731707 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.