The pie charts below give data on the spending and consumption of resources by countries of the world and how the population is distributed.
Presenting the pie charts are involved in the difference of resources in consumption in 5 continent, namely America, Europe, Africa, Asia and other areas. And also, how the amount of the proportion on the spending
Overall, as can be observed that there is no correlation between the world population and its consumption of resources. Almost the large of using the resources are belong to USA and Europe areas.
It is clear that Asia accounted for the half of population in the world, but it is not the highest consumption of resources. Europe and America are virtually counted to three-fifth of the consumption of resources with its residents had just 28% in summary. Moreover, Africa contributes to 10% of the entire world, in which, other land had just a fraction of the world population with 5%. Along with Asia, Africa and Other areas are gained to 40% in utilizing their resources.
Looking at the nation in spending of resources, food is the main consumption in almost all dwellers in the world with it is recorded to 24%. The use of transport is third-ranked to 18%, and housing is made up 12% and a few of 6% in buying clothing. And miscellaneous comprised 40% in spending of population.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'continent' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'continents'.
Suggestion: continents
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Line 1, column 214, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...amount of the proportion on the spending Overall, as can be observed that there i...
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Line 2, column 165, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'belonged'.
Suggestion: belonged
...st the large of using the resources are belong to USA and Europe areas. It is clear ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, third, well, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 996.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83495145631 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90583351443 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533980582524 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3559047402 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260808899511 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961298178606 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655084205239 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157170510904 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459969219192 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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